Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Sickness.

drip
drip
drip


She stares down curiously at the blood that drips from the knife she holds in her hand. drip, drip. She turns it over and over and over again. Glinting metal, a bloody red. Blood. She laughs as she sees the man lying still and unmoving at her feet. Hm. This just got curiouser and curiouser. Softly, she giggles. Alice in Wonderland. Hums softly. She pokes at the body with her toe. Leans down and stares into the face, eyes wide open and frozen with a look of eternal fear. She smiles, delighted. Starts to sing softly, still staring into the dead, dead face. Brushes the hair back, gets blood on her fingers. She brings it up to the light, squinting a little. And lets out a laugh. Another. And another, till the knife plunges into her own body and doesn't stop, doesn't stop, doesn't stop...


drip
drip
drip

13 comments:

Ali said...

wow amazing reminds me of the scene when serge stabs kid and had a squint on his face!!!

mehreenkasana said...

Not deep enough. *frowns skeptically*

Ubaid said...
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Maryam said...
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Anushay. said...

I like the psychopath =D
I love her laughing for murdering him.

*gives evil laughter*

Ubaid, that was downright rude. You don't want us to critically analyse writings, do you now?
Phir tum aur Ali kaho ge ke mjhay maukah chahiey kisi ki taking karnay ka.

Bitter Truth said...

Maryam, the emotions were beautifully expressed and definitely made sense! :)

Keep writing.

Marina said...

'Curiouser and curiouser' and the constant laughing - you got me freaked, lady. Good work.

Ubaid said...

@maryam
sorry about that

@anushay
gee you are right! it was rude, i realised it when i read it now....

Maryam said...

Ubaid, you didn't have to delete the comment, I didn't mind it that much =|

Maryam said...

Bitter Truth, Marina: Thank you!! <3

Ubaid said...

@Mayram
nahi but it was unlike me naah, i was waisey hi in bad mood, toh thats why posted that... i read this thing again... and well i liked it this time honestly.... per the girl kind of sounds psyco!!

Maryam said...
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Lonely Perverted Soul said...

Now why can't i get a nice Psyhco girl like that... :P